Angel of Death

I would love to do this but I need help understanding exactly what I'm supposed to do.

Okay I love Twilight and Edward Cullen, and I also love Fangs now. People can say that Edward was made into a complete joke but I loved this. I was ...

I guess it could be Pop or R&B but I guess I was leaning towards Pop. This came to me for in my head one day I just start singing ...

This was sooo beautiful, are you going to continue it farther?

I will finish this part of Lily of my Heart soon...and then to finish the whole story I'll add a Part 4.

I liked it. I thought he was a vampire "spawn of death" well then it turns out they really are dancing. Nice how you tricked the reader.

I know people may have a lot of questions and when you read on you'll find the answers. I am pretty much aware that this first part of the story ...

Thanks Penguin, I really am starting to see what you and Suzanne mean. I need to add more description and make it more traditional. I really don't think I know ...

It's supposed to be read exactly the way its written. I know this isn't the traditional way to write a story but I wanted to be different. Well anyways it's ...

Like always I loved it. I don't understand why Lukas doesn't just give in.

I also love how you lace lyrics into the story. Its like putting matching shoe laces in the holes of a nice pair of shoes. Well I'm going to keep ...

I feel like I know the characters now. Tell them I said hi LOL. Well anyways again I am impressed. I love Nicholas as you probably already know. Well I'm ...

I think I'm in love with Nicholas. You built up his character so well. I can tell that Charlie and Nicholas will fall in love, am I right? Well anyways ...

Loved it!!! True Brilliance.

I really enjoyed this. The title fits perfectly with this story. Loved it!!!